When Things Begin to Fall
When the sunlight begins to fade
And the squirrels start to scurry
A change is in the air
Whether we are aware
When things begin to fall
The temperature is dropping
And the covers are needed in the nights
Soup begins to soothe
The cold that bites
When things begin to fall
The trees start to shed
And their limbs appear exposed
“Like a city without walls”
Character cannot be composed
When things begin to fall
Trees drop their pleasantries
That which gives them their identities
The ugliness of necessity
And survival is pellucid
When things begin to fall
Yet there is not just one season
In which a plant is a vivid liaison
Of a time of death and life
In this space and time which starts
When things begin to fall
The fallen leaves are not completely lost
In a vast forest of nature’s cost
Their death is the plant’s gain
In which it is sustained
When things begin to fall
This new life begins next spring
As a creator to the canvas He brings
A new hope, a new life
And sacrifice fit for a King
When things begin to fall
5 Comments:
awesome.
it's interesting to see your thoughts in a creative form and not limited to academic... "structure"
also-
you cover "bush meat", "hometeam" (see reference to 'city walls') and a random e-mail about the changing fall colors... all while using "soothe", "pellucid", and "liaison"
you, my man, write from experience
I love it
I was curious about the "bush meat" reference, and then I read the second lined and laughed out loud. :-) Thanks brother.
great poem...powerful to see everything come full circle!
I love it when you exercise your poetic 'nature' (get it? nature? teehee)
I have a confession though- I kinda, sorta, maybe, had to dictionary.com 'pellucid'.
I shall now use it in a sentence: Jason writes in beautifully pellucid prose (okay, I'll admit, I hi-jacked that sentence from dictionary.com)
Anyway, keep your pen movin'- I'm totally enjoying your words.
Hahaha! That was great! And if someone had just put that poem in front of me and asked me to guess who wrote it, I would have undoubtedly picked you. You have your very own style, and it is a fun and good one.
Oh, and good job on the word verification.
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